Date of publication: 2017-09-06 06:38
First, one should explain what is globalization. Then about rural society its structure, nature and importance in India. Moving on, there are many aspects where the impact of globalization is profound.
8) In the penultimate paragraph, you have mentioned few 8766 social movements 8767 actually the essay is about them, so you would have elaborated them
insights sir can u give details about some democratic ills, what ever i mentioned are they relevant pls comment. if not pls explain me where i did wrong.
Even the existence of ghosts and other
discarnate entities have been validated after conducting experiments where
scientists have themselves observed and recorded dead persons materialize. Recently
scientist Michael Roll has interpreted the subatomic particles called neutrinos
may be responsible for these paranormal occurrences. The neutrino is an
electrically neutral particle that travels close to the speed of light and
passes through ordinary matter unaffected. If we consider that those entities
are made of such neutrinos then we have given a scientific basis for the
existence of souls and how it transcends into alternate realities and passing
through matter and interacting with it as well.
Is it the nature itself of avant-garde culture that is alone responsible for the danger it finds itself in? Or is that only a dangerous liability? Are there other, and perhaps more important, factors involved?
However despite these drawbacks our constitution makers preferred a democratic framework for precisely the reason that India has a huge diversity of culture, religion, language. They held that holding together such huge diversity by force would only lead to dissatisfaction and fragmentation of the country.
Thank you so much for your beneficial website. I have taken IELTS exams several times, however, I could not achieve a bad score of over 6 in all of them in writing, providing that my score in speaking was . My English teachers believe that my writing level is high and I have should scored 7 and above.
India has a second largest population in the world and a very low dependency ratio. To cash in this huge manpower and to reap demographic dividend, we need to enhance the condition of our higher education system. A few institutes of excellence has masked the deplorable condition of the mediocrity of the average higher educational institutes, its faculty and infrastructure facilities. We need to improve our higher education system if we aim to be a superpower in the world.
Lack of consistency in state policy regarding higher education has contributed to the deplorable state of higher education. The policy of higher education has been dictated by the whims of the ruling party. There has been no consistent policy for higher education. Mostly it has been a patch work and lacks consistency and is driven by vote bank politics as in case of establishment of new IITs and IIMs even though infrastructure for them is still not available after five years of their establishment.
Before starting your essay, draw flow chart, or jot down quick ideas, interrelate them, brainstorm about various angles take 85-95 minutes for this.
The geographical distribution of these U& C is quite uneven as most are concentrated in metropolitan and other urban areas. While the Governments have attempted an equitable distribution, private U& C far outnumber public U& C and thus distort the distribution. On the other hand, stream-wise distribution is also uneven, where engineering and management institutes, running in lakhs, outnumber all other institutes. This not only represents the genuine incapability of the state to accommodate the increasing number of students, but also the structural distortion in the Indian economy, where the service sector dominates.
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Overall, your essay is good. If you can give depth and various dimensions without wandering away from the topic (here, you have not), your essay will fetch very good marks.
If we asked the College Board what the difference is between a 6 and an 8 SAT essay, they would direct us to their scoring criteria below that describes the difference between the 8 and 9 essays scores in Reading, Analysis, and Writing (a total score of 8 comes from two readers separately giving your essay a 9 in each of those three areas). We’ve marked the differences between the 8 and 9 criteria in bold.
Good luck. Try to aim for accuracy in your English to reduce errors. And remember that having a clear meaning is more important than complex language if your English is not too strong.
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